Эссе ЕГЭ по английскому на тему «Здоровый образ жизни» — пример на 14 баллов

A healthy lifestyle matters more to young people than ever before. I am doing a project on what teenagers at my school do to stay healthy, and I have found the results of a survey in the pie chart below. I will analyse the data and give my opinion. According to the chart, the response "Doing sport" (40%) ranks ahead of all the other answers, followed by "Eating healthy food" (25%). Only 7% of teenagers chose "Nothing special", the least popular answer. Looking more closely at the figures, one can note that "Doing sport" is far more popular than "Eating healthy food", as the difference between these two responses is 15 percentage points. This is quite explicable, given that sport is active and social, and teenagers often do it together. However, this focus on sport can hide a problem. Many teenagers exercise but still sleep too little and spend hours on their phones, which harms their health. One way of solving this is to explain that a healthy lifestyle is a balance of several habits, not just one. In my opinion, sport alone is not enough to stay healthy, because the body also needs rest and proper food. Personally, I try to combine regular exercise with a good sleep schedule, as I feel far more energetic when I do both. All in all, the data shows that teenagers are on the right track, but they should pay more attention to rest and screen time as well.