Эссе ЕГЭ по английскому на тему «Выбор будущей профессии» — пример на 14 баллов

Choosing a future career is one of the most important decisions a young person makes. I am doing a project on what matters most to teenagers in my region when choosing a job, and I have found the results of a survey shown in the pie chart below. According to the chart, the response "High salary" (34%) ranks ahead of the other factors, closely followed by "Interesting work" (30%). At the bottom of the list, only 8% of teenagers chose "Work-life balance". Looking more closely at the figures, one can note that "High salary" attracts more than four times as many teenagers as "Work-life balance", as the difference between these two responses is 26 percentage points. This is quite understandable, given that money feels like the most obvious measure of a successful career. However, this focus on salary can lead to a problem. Some teenagers may choose a well-paid job they do not enjoy and feel unhappy later. One way of solving this is to organise career guidance at school, so that students can try different professions before they decide. In my opinion, money should not be the only thing that matters, because we spend most of our lives at work. Personally, I would rather have a job I find interesting than a boring but well-paid one. To sum up, the data shows that teenagers think about earnings first, but they should also consider whether the work itself will make them happy.